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« on: May 25, 2008, 11:48:48 AM »
I walk through the door
and one by one
articles of clothing fall from my body
Their eyes are powerful
or so they think
and in no time I am naked
amids a room full of lonley men
Lonliness reeks from their body in the guise of tequila, jack daniels and cheap American beer
fully clothed I am exposed
first my breasts, to the small of my back and all the curves below
and i am made love to violently
with their perverted eyes
behind a shot of vodka,
and I am bold!
but at this point
my breasts are more powerful than my brain
and all the wit that comes with it.
I hold the goods
the balls are in my court, baby!
I pull out a cigarette and a constillation of lights flash before me
exposing my nakedness
Naked.
I inhale and sigh as I see who is next in line
I feel for them
in all their hormone-charged perversion
Just like them.
In this aging bar
where we all go home alone.

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« Reply #1 on: May 25, 2008, 06:38:00 PM »
I love this lines hippieinchains.....it seems yearning too long for an  erotic life adventures.  ;) Extreme romance beyond compromise.

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« Reply #2 on: May 25, 2008, 08:58:38 PM »
Hi Hippie, another dazzling poem of your creation. Full of delicious description. :)

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« Reply #3 on: May 26, 2008, 01:06:30 PM »
Thanks guys. Just identifying with the guys in my own way. They disgust me at times, but I identify with them, if that makes any sense. After all I do find myself in those situations. what can I say?

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« Reply #4 on: May 26, 2008, 02:18:00 PM »
 where do you go clubbin, hippie?

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« Reply #5 on: May 26, 2008, 06:23:07 PM »
Don't really go clubbin' anymore. I go to little hole in the walls every now and then. Why, you in the area?

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« Reply #6 on: May 27, 2008, 12:21:02 PM »
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« Reply #7 on: May 27, 2008, 12:31:44 PM »
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« Reply #8 on: May 27, 2008, 12:49:29 PM »
OH youre close to vancouver, bc.. i go there once every 3 months..

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« Reply #9 on: May 27, 2008, 12:55:37 PM »
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« Reply #10 on: June 11, 2008, 10:44:44 AM »
Well written, Hippie. Creativity flows from your mind.

Salute!

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« Reply #11 on: June 11, 2008, 11:23:53 AM »
we should meet up sometime.

if you ever come down to LA why not

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« Reply #12 on: June 12, 2008, 09:10:57 AM »
i go to la all the time!!! my mom lives there.

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« Reply #13 on: June 12, 2008, 02:43:04 PM »
where in LA? im close to thousand oaks area..

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« Reply #14 on: June 14, 2008, 12:14:44 PM »
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« Reply #15 on: June 15, 2008, 07:33:13 AM »
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« Reply #16 on: June 15, 2008, 07:33:36 AM »
mag EB pod ta dri.. ahhahaa.. knsa uban naduol namu?

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« Reply #17 on: June 22, 2008, 08:07:22 AM »
mao gyod. wala ko kahibalo kinsay duol nato.

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« Reply #18 on: June 23, 2008, 01:25:30 PM »
yeah we should knsa naa dri sa SOCAL area?  are u currently in SOCAL hippie?  its pacquaio's vs diaz this saturday.. perhaps we could all watch it at some filipino resto.. or somethin..

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« Reply #19 on: June 24, 2008, 02:10:28 PM »
im in WA now and wont be in SOCAL for a few months. i will be watching the game here though.


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