A Trip in a Ship

[lumine]

here's another poem which was also published in our school organ when i was college.

it only took me less than 10 minutes to write this because i was so inspired in one of my vacations going to cagayan de oro.

last night, my husband submitted two of my poems at www.poetry.com where he is a member.



A Trip In A Ship
I slept in a ship,
When zephyr touched my skin
But when I looked, it's not the Wind
It's a seaman from within.

A vigorous and handsome guy,
Staring at me and smiled
A little silence passed by,
And I began to wonder why.

Hearing the tinkling sound of his heart,
Knocking, whispering though we're apart
Reading the intermittent gleams of his eyes
Saying "I love you", how very nice.

Love? What a wonderful word to hear
My heart is beating, but I have to bear
But Lo! He's a stranger to me
So how could it be.

He and me in sinuous offing
Sharing, talking and dreaming
A little love is growing deep
Oh! What a wonderful trip in a ship.


Lumine Pitoy Marginet
Copyright ©2008  Lumine Pitoy Marginet

[willmerit]

good job men!  nindot na poem

[lumine]

good job men!  nindot na poem

thanks,ams!

[orChids]

How sweet.Mura'g gusto ko ma-inlove again.

[Bambi]

Lumine,
I like and love this lovely poem.  Good job!  You're too inspired, right?

[lumine]

How sweet.Mura'g gusto ko ma-inlove again.

very cute jud ta sya na crew,aya.hehe!

[lumine]

Lumine,
I like and love this lovely poem.  Good job!  You're too inspired, right?

hello te bams! those were the days na if kita ka gwapo naa ka sa cloud nine dayon,hehe!

[grazie7y]

Ngek!  I thought metaphor lang ang seaman, tinuod jud diay ug gwapo pa jud!   Anyhow, nice job, my dear sister!  I love and like it, just like what Ms. Bambi said.  I am proud of you!

[lumine]

Ngek!  I thought metaphor lang ang seaman, tinuod jud diay ug gwapo pa jud!   Anyhow, nice job, my dear sister!  I love and like it, just like what Ms. Bambi said.  I am proud of you!

tinuod oy!hehe! pro sa later part sa poem,gaimagine nako na pansinon ko,hehe!

[grazie7y]

Kaluoy sad!  Maayo na lang wa ka pansina kay di unta mo magkita ni Bro Herman unya di unta bulagaw ug buhok si Baby Matt!

[lumine]

  ;Dbuing man ka ate oy! bulagaw noon kay tagadagat man, .

[grazie7y]

Ngek!   

[willmerit]

hahahhaa mao ba men?  kasagaran bitaw seaman na kay cute on.

[lumine]

hahahhaa mao ba men?  kasagaran bitaw seaman na kay cute on.

mosamot sila ka cute sa ila white uniform, di ba, ams? da! sa una ra to oy!hehe!

[willmerit]

men naa pod ko crush sauna, pagkacute pod oi.

[grazie7y]

tua na ang duha!

[lumine]

men naa pod ko crush sauna, pagkacute pod oi.

ana man jud na, ams,dali ra ta kaau macrush sa cutero passing ra gud,di ba?

[willmerit]

hehehheh, pastilang guapoha man gud to tawhana ba.  daghan na siguro tog uyab or asawa karon ehheheh.  baw ba oi, nganong cute man na sila tan awon ug mag uniform ug puti. 

[Vito Andoline]

inspiring.love to hear lums.

[Happy]

Ma'am Inse, poet man diay ka

[Scarb]

Lumine,

nice poem, nakahinumdom hinoon kos admirer taga barko dah!

(Haps, naa naman lagi ky baby?)

[lumine]

inspiring.love to hear lums.

thanks,ads!

Ma'am Inse, poet man diay ka

sauna ra to, cel oy!

Lumine,

nice poem, nakahinumdom hinoon kos admirer taga barko dah!

thanks,blue! see? naa jud lagi daghan diri mga kagahapon,hehe!

[Vito Andoline]

mahilig man siguro ka ug seaman sa una lums.lol,joke

[lumine]

dili jud ads! kung kinsa ra gud unta to moabot basta buotan ug kabuhi lang pamilya.

[Vito Andoline]

bitaw sad noh.maayo gyud nang mangandam sa  ugma dam-ag aw  damlag.lol

[lumine]

bitaw sad noh.maayo gyud nang mangandam sa  ugma dam-ag aw  damlag.lol

haha!katok man ka kaau,ads oy!

[Vito Andoline]

hay buhay.kami kaha ani unsa kaha ang among  magama na sugilanon.lol.

[Happy]

(Haps, naa naman lagi ky baby?)

Blue, hinuwaman rana sa akong amiga nga bag-ong nanganak

[Happy]

Ma'am Inse, poet man diay ka

sauna ra to, cel oy!

Pwede gihapon na ug ipadayon m'am inse, labi na karon nga naa kay duha ka inspiration

[lumine]

Ma'am Inse, poet man diay ka

sauna ra to, cel oy!

Pwede gihapon na ug ipadayon m'am inse, labi na karon nga naa kay duha ka inspiration

plan btaw ko cel to write another poem.next showing,hehe!

[Vito Andoline]

agoy abi nako ug imo na happs kanang imo ng gibitbit.on shalan ba na oi.