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Gahom Sa Pagbati

Started by pioneer, November 12, 2007, 08:12:30 AM

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pioneer

Gahom Sa Pagbati
sinulat ni m. ligalig

Hangyoon ko ang mga balili nga sapnayon
ang tibuok mong lawas samtang nahitagpilaw
ka diha sa batiis sa nagdagaydayng sapa
kansang tubod maoy yamog sa bulak
nga atong gipuy-an ug gihimong gingharian.

Tawgon ko ang mga tamsi aron sila makasaksi
sa hubo mong lawas nga gisapnay sa mga balili.

Paawitan ko ikaw sa mga punay ug limokon,
moharana kanimo ang mga dimudlawon ug tokmo.

Bugawon ko ang mga lamok ug manhak
nga may kahidlaw mopang-it sa imong tikod.

Unya, sugoon ko ang mga manatad ug banog
sa pagkuha ug dahong anahaw,
ug paypayan ka sa mga kusi ug maya,
kon ugaling bation ka ug kainit
inig abot sa naglagiting nga udtong tutok.

Paanhion ko ang mga parak-parak ug buta-buta
aron sila ang mobantay sa mga prutas
nga giandam ko alang kanimo sa imong pagmata.

Ug sa imong pagmata, ayaw tug-ani ang mga langgam
sa akong pangalan kay mobukal ang tubig sa sapa.
Romans 10:9
"That if you shall confess with your mouth the Lord Jesus, and shall believe in your heart that God has raised him from the dead, you shall be saved."

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grazie7y

Ug nganong mobukal man ang tubig sa sapa?
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pioneer

Quote from: grazie7y on November 12, 2007, 08:23:05 AM
Ug nganong mobukal man ang tubig sa sapa?


Grace, that is poetry. I don't know, Grace. :)
Romans 10:9
"That if you shall confess with your mouth the Lord Jesus, and shall believe in your heart that God has raised him from the dead, you shall be saved."

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ms da binsi

Re: Hangyoon ko ang mga balili nga sapnayon
ang tibuok mong lawas samtang nahitagpilaw



Dili kaha ka ma pandol?

basi bug-at sha???

C2H4

Hahaha!

Kani jud si Miss Grazie,

daghan mga pangutana...

wala siguro ni kahibaw nga naay don't ask, don't tell policy being enforced right now...

joke!

With regards to Mike's balak, Ms BeLLe and I are doing an extensive analysis of it right now,

It'll probably take us years and years of hard work to decipher the whole poem...

But as with all of Mike's works,

this one is a winner...

:)
If you're going through hell...keep on going...

pioneer

Quote from: ms da binsi on November 12, 2007, 08:35:29 AM
Re: Hangyoon ko ang mga balili nga sapnayon
ang tibuok mong lawas samtang nahitagpilaw



Dili kaha ka ma pandol?

basi bug-at sha???

Ms Belle, ug bug-at sya, gamitan ug crane.
Romans 10:9
"That if you shall confess with your mouth the Lord Jesus, and shall believe in your heart that God has raised him from the dead, you shall be saved."

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pioneer

Quote from: C2H4 on November 12, 2007, 08:37:55 AM
Hahaha!

Kani jud si Miss Grazie,

daghan mga pangutana...

wala siguro ni kahibaw nga naay don't ask, don't tell policy being enforced right now...

joke!

With regards to Mike's balak, Ms BeLLe and I are doing an extensive analysis of it right now,

It'll probably take us years and years of hard work to decipher the whole poem...

But as with all of Mike's works,

this one is a winner...

:)

thyl, it is always okay to ask, kaso lang dili ko katubag kay most of the time dili ko kasabot ug kahubad sa akong gisulat nga mga poems.

at times i choose not to interpret a poem so that it will remain a secret, private thought of mine hangtud sa kamatayon...
Romans 10:9
"That if you shall confess with your mouth the Lord Jesus, and shall believe in your heart that God has raised him from the dead, you shall be saved."

• • • • •
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C2H4

Quote from: Bohol on November 12, 2007, 08:40:34 AM
Ms Belle, ug bug-at sya, gamitan ug crane.

Hahaha, grabe pud ni si Mike oi, si-aw pud.

Mas nindot man paminawon ang balili, cranes have no use in poetry.

;)
If you're going through hell...keep on going...

C2H4

Quote from: Bohol on November 12, 2007, 08:43:28 AM
thyl, it is always okay to ask, kaso lang dili ko katubag kay most of the time dili ko kasabot ug kahubad sa akong gisulat nga mga poems.

at times i choose not to interpret a poem so that it will remain a secret, private thought of mine hangtud sa kamatayon...

Mike, secrets cause indigestion.

(I just read your post about indigestion raba in the other thread)

:)

If you're going through hell...keep on going...

grazie7y

C2, we need not seek explanation for feelings of love hahahah mura man na kanta!
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C2H4

Quote from: grazie7y on November 12, 2007, 08:47:47 AM
C2, we need not seek explanation for feelings of love hahahah mura man na kanta!

You're right, Miss Grazie.

It is self-explanatory.

*Does this mean you and me and ms belle should mind our own business?*

;D
If you're going through hell...keep on going...

grazie7y

Mike, very profound imong mga balak. You are such a gifted and beautiful man. 

Ginger told me before about your balak for your Tatay.  I didn't read right away kay mahadlok lagi ko but I finally did.  Nag comment ra ko didto na thread.
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grazie7y

Quote from: C2H4 on November 12, 2007, 08:51:15 AM
You're right, Miss Grazie.

It is self-explanatory.

*Does this mean you and me and ms belle should mind our own business?*

;D

I think ok ra man siguro mag kukabildo ta ani kay about love man.  Love gives wings to our hearts.
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C2H4

Quote from: grazie7y on November 12, 2007, 09:04:19 AM
I think ok ra man siguro mag kukabildo ta ani kay about love man.  Love gives wings to our hearts.

Sus, naa na pud nang word nga 'kukabildo' hehehe

ga lisod jud kog sabot ana

;D
If you're going through hell...keep on going...

hazel

Quote from: Bohol on November 12, 2007, 08:12:30 AM
Gahom Sa Pagbati
sinulat ni m. ligalig

Hangyoon ko ang mga balili nga sapnayon
ang tibuok mong lawas samtang nahitagpilaw
ka diha sa batiis sa nagdagaydayng sapa
kansang tubod maoy yamog sa bulak
nga atong gipuy-an ug gihimong gingharian.


this is one nice balak. very romantic man ni oi...

wa lang ko kasabot sa sapa nga mi bukal. ;D

grazie7y

I asked the same question, Haze, but MIke said, wala sya kabalo coz that's poetry.  I guess, ang heart ra pod maka understand ana dear!
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hazel


basin ang meaning sa bukal is anger. kay di man kuno mag saba. LOL!

grazie7y

but it could also mean na basin mag overflow na hinuon ang love kay mabal-an naman that the subject in this balak feels the same love.
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hazel


hahaha mura ta mga hangal dire...nag kukabildo sa balak nga mismo ang ga sulat, di man gani ka interpret.

grazie7y

hahahha bitaw oi, we need not interpret naman jud sa feelings coz love, to begin with has no reason...
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pioneer

ang mo-interpret basin makahubo... :)
Romans 10:9
"That if you shall confess with your mouth the Lord Jesus, and shall believe in your heart that God has raised him from the dead, you shall be saved."

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ms da binsi

Hala!!!

erotic ang meaning sa nag bukal???

wahahhahhahhahahha

**nagpamati ra ko ninjo ha**

Macky Ferniz

Quote from: Bohol on November 12, 2007, 08:12:30 AM
Gahom Sa Pagbati
sinulat ni m. ligalig

Hangyoon ko ang mga balili nga sapnayon
ang tibuok mong lawas samtang nahitagpilaw
ka diha sa batiis sa nagdagaydayng sapa
kansang tubod maoy yamog sa bulak
nga atong gipuy-an ug gihimong gingharian.

Akong na imagine nga nag "Bayanihan" ang mga balili (nagdayong). Unya mi singgit ang usa ka balili "uno, dos, banat ginamos!". Abutan ug pila ka lakang may mi singgit na sab nga usa ka balili "hunong sa pre kay kapoy na, mo tagay una ta ug tuba!"

grazie7y

hahahaha makalingaw anang imong imagination in relation to mike's balak, Macky!  Festive kaayo ang dating!  Thanks! 
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hazel

Quote from: Bohol on November 13, 2007, 04:39:54 AM
ang mo-interpret basin makahubo... :)

kung mag inigat ang ga interpret, maka hubo gyud.  :D

Quote from: Macky Ferniz on November 13, 2007, 05:51:09 AM
Akong na imagine nga nag "Bayanihan" ang mga balili (nagdayong). Unya mi singgit ang usa ka balili "uno, dos, banat ginamos!". Abutan ug pila ka lakang may mi singgit na sab nga usa ka balili "hunong sa pre kay kapoy na, mo tagay una ta ug tuba!"

ka sadya nila oi...:D

C2H4

Ang nagsuwat sa balak ug ang gisuwatan, mao ra maka interpret ani...

kahibaw man ta kinsa ang nagsuwat,

kinsa man ang gisuwatan?

;D

Ang makatag-an naay premyo from ms da binsi...

;D
If you're going through hell...keep on going...

ms da binsi

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