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before you go (what i didn't say)
« on: June 08, 2008, 02:51:59 PM »
Let’s run away, so there would be no more goodbyes,
where there are no more wars to fight but out own silly battles
over who will take out the trash
 and who won the last scrabble game.

Lets take our sheets and build a home.
You don’t have to give me a ring
Just wake up beside me and I’ll be fine.
If only you could take me with you.
A soldier’s life is sad
but two soldier’s lives are short lived
and lonely.
Take me with you



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« Reply #1 on: July 06, 2008, 11:03:04 PM »
And, dare I ask, did this brave soldado take your heed?

I can't help but feel a cold shiver down my spine after reading this.

Very emotional, very primal and deep. All at once.

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« Reply #2 on: July 07, 2008, 11:52:05 AM »
we almost got married. in the relationship portion in tubag bohol, I refer to him as 'J'. feel free to read and i can tell you the stories you go along.

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« Reply #3 on: August 06, 2008, 06:19:45 PM »
"A soldier’s life is sad
but two soldier’s lives are short lived"

these are the poem's powerful lines...

maybe, the ending would have been good if you put

JUST before "Take me with you"

wink!
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« Reply #4 on: August 07, 2008, 05:20:18 AM »
That works! I will edit it. Thanks!

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« Reply #5 on: November 10, 2014, 07:53:58 AM »
What ever happened between the soldiers?  Did they finally get their love?

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« Reply #6 on: November 10, 2014, 12:20:47 PM »
i'm waiting too.  patiently.  i wish this story has a happy ending.
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« Reply #7 on: November 10, 2014, 02:12:04 PM »
Simbako lagong nga ito ang mangyari...





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« Reply #8 on: November 10, 2014, 05:19:25 PM »
aw, ngano ba uroy.  itlog ra ba diay ang saligan aning kinabuhia. 8)

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« Reply #9 on: November 10, 2014, 05:55:19 PM »

Blatant and unmitigated plagiarism! That's Bay Bugsay's signature line! ;D



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