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Moon II
« on: October 07, 2007, 09:14:59 PM »
in this light
i can see you.
i can tell when a smile is on your face.
i know where you hide your hands,
see every ray of moonlight in your eyes,
and where your hair,
down to the last strand,
falls on your dress.
and if the moon decides
to hide
behind clouds tonight,
the night would not be dark.
you are here to take her place,
and i, like the sea,
drift to where you will me.

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Re: Moon II
« Reply #1 on: October 08, 2007, 12:33:55 AM »
wow! i love this one, Mr Sigbin...

romantic and sensual...

reminds me of Neruda...



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Re: Moon II
« Reply #2 on: October 08, 2007, 12:41:19 AM »
Only a person who is at the moment in love can jot down such a romantic poetic inclination. ;) WOW gajod Ite!

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Re: Moon II
« Reply #3 on: October 08, 2007, 12:44:51 AM »
in this light
i can see you.
i can tell when a smile is on your face.
i know where you hide your hands,
see every ray of moonlight in your eyes,
and where your hair,
down to the last strand,
falls on your dress.
and if the moon decides
to hide
behind clouds tonight,
the night would not be dark.
you are here to take her place,
and i, like the sea,
drift to where you will me.

Hi Sigbin...

Nice poetry. I wish I could write as romantic as you. ;)

Is this dedicated to someone in Tubag Bohol? ;)
Just curious.



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Re: Moon II
« Reply #4 on: October 08, 2007, 02:06:39 AM »
I suspect it's dedicated to a beautiful lady who's in Europe right now

 :)

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Re: Moon II
« Reply #5 on: October 08, 2007, 02:11:00 AM »
I suspect it's dedicated to a beautiful lady who's in Europe right now

 :)

mao jud ms c2

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Re: Moon II
« Reply #6 on: October 08, 2007, 09:23:14 AM »
Wow, to be compared with Neruda. :D  Thanks everyone! :)

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Re: Moon II
« Reply #7 on: May 12, 2008, 01:11:27 PM »
your words never fail to make me fall in love. you are gifted!

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Re: Moon II
« Reply #8 on: May 16, 2008, 07:35:07 PM »
Thanks, Yin. :)  Your writing never fails to arouse my interest too. ;D hehe

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Re: Moon II
« Reply #9 on: May 23, 2008, 07:30:33 PM »
hala.. gwapo jud kaayo...

one comment lng sa grammar.

dapat falls "ONTO" your dress

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Re: Moon II
« Reply #10 on: May 23, 2008, 09:02:13 PM »
hala.. gwapo jud kaayo...

one comment lng sa grammar.

dapat falls "ONTO" your dress

poetic license na sa werewolf of Bohol... Paul, nasugdan na siguro nimo ang Cabernet Sauvignon nato kay waxing romantic man ta ron...

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Re: Moon II
« Reply #11 on: May 23, 2008, 09:06:44 PM »
Hi Sigbin...

Nice poetry. I wish I could write as romantic as you. ;)

Is this dedicated to someone in Tubag Bohol? ;)
Just curious.

Makabuak ug baso ni nga poem. Very beautiful. Murag dedicated jud ni for a Boholana.

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Re: Moon II
« Reply #12 on: May 25, 2008, 11:07:40 AM »
Only a Boholana can inspire such a delicatly intense flavor.

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Re: Moon II
« Reply #13 on: May 27, 2008, 05:23:06 PM »
Thanks, everyone, for the nice words.  Boylawas, yes, you're right.  And "onto" does enhance the feel and rhythm of the line.

Yes, it was written with a Boholana in mind, but it was written so many years ago, long before the cabernet sauvignon, Sir Ben. :)  However, I am not adverse to a bottle of one right now.  Naa ba diha? :D

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